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发表于 13-4-2008 11:07 AM | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
我语法很烂,帮我看看is/are/was pass tense 等等有错地方帮我改改,要说明哦。谢谢






The Mickey MP3 you want Still available, Please note that it is NOT an Original Disney & Irriver Version, and NOT warraty was provides for this product since costs of sending back to place of origins are high. All Devices will be tested before sent, one to one exchange within 1 week is granted only for manufacturing defects.


Transfer of good only by post either register parcel RM 3 or Courier RM8, Buyer will bear the costs.

Total RM 70 plus postage fees can be made through bank transfer
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发表于 13-4-2008 12:11 PM | 显示全部楼层
use at your own risk...!!
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The Mickey MP3 that you want is still available,
Please take note that it is NOT the Original Disney & Irriver Version, and NO warranty will be provided for this product since the cost of sending it back to the origin place is high.
All Devices will be fully tested before delivering, direct one to one replacement is only applicable to manufacturing defects within 1 week .

Delivering of goods can only be done by postage,which is either registered parcel RM 3 or courier service RM8. Buyers must bear the costs.

The total payment is RM 70 plus additional postage fees which can be made by money transfer through bank.
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 楼主| 发表于 14-4-2008 09:08 AM | 显示全部楼层

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哇,我错这样多啊!多谢指导

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