英文 的 presentation

Justin_Tan1223

想请问英文很好的你们，
我最近去上英文会话的课，老师要我写一张 presentation 冠以我的工作，要念出来的。
但是，我写作能力不是很好，开头第一段该怎么说？怎么写？
可以给点意见教我内容要写到什么吗？或者给我一个例子作为参考...


谢谢了！

[ 本帖最后由 Justin_Tan1223 于 5-1-2007 11:28 PM 编辑 ]

Mr.Bean

呃。。即然要念出来的，那开头应该是先称呼一下吧，这是一种礼貌，比如good  morning teacher  and  friends之类的。然后接下来你就讲你的标题吧，例如，the  title  of  my  presentation  today  is xxxx。

给你做个参考。看看谁还有更好的开场白不妨也提出来。

darksider

昨天，是我第一次站在台上对着49学生和我的老师前致词，很感谢他，给我一个这么好得的机会。

如果你是第一次的话，Shivering,fear are inevitable.Don't worry if you make any mistake.

你想说的话，不可以抄下来，你一定要记在你的脑
You have to prepare your speech mentally,don't ever write dialogues on a paper,just prepare it in mind.
Your mouth is the message sender of your brain,what you think,what you say.

My sir asked all of us to present 3 things
a)what's your name?
b)where're your come from?
c)What's your ambition?

First of all,you must understand grammar.
Grammar=english,english=Grammar.

When you start your presentation,always address everyone.
For example,very good evening to ladies and gentlemen.
Well,pls don't tell people your title if they have already known,it's ridiculous to speak repetitive things.(Use indirect way to start your presentation's title if they dont know,otherwise it would be very dull.

However,all the listeners will certainly pressure you,everyone look at your,so you must look at everyone,since to reciprocate them.Eventhough you're nervous,you have to control your nervousness.Don't be shy,be bold,just speak loudly,people will applaud at the end.If you make mistake,don't laugh,you're laughing to hide your inferiority.

There are three types of applause:
1)Just to encourage you.
2)You have done a good job even there are some mistakes.
3)You are brilliant.

This is my speech's script in my mind yesterday,although i have prepared everything in my mind,but when i stepped onto stage,my nervousness killed my points.

Good evening everyone,when my mother gave birth to me,she and my father have created an ordinary name to me,it's Ooi Soon Ee(you can express in Surname,Lastname.)Well,my name seems doesn't  make any sense,just the Ooi and Soon.In mandarin,Ooi means yellow,and soon particularly means things go well,you can always call me anything as it relates to my name and makes sense,i will always reciprocate you.
Well,i'm studying in a mediocre school at the island of Penang which is Chung Hwa Confucian.It's a very strict school,you can be monk in a second,in a totally unexpected way.why is that so strict?It's because my school is confucian based.Confucian comes from confucius,peoples in the world perceive confucius as the best teacher in the world,but in my opinion,there's one teacher who also deserve this name,and he's Mr Benny(my teacher),He's the best teacher i have ever seen in my life,his seriousness has motivated me a lot.(5 s applause interrupted me,i said thank you to everyone,-BE POLITE AND FRIEDNLY).

However,i don't have any ambition yet.(Man,everyone was laughing There's merely me said no ambition.)I know it's very difficult to make a decision,once i make it,nothing will deter me from going through,and im certain that i wont reverse.That's also the reason why i come here,i enter this room to learn skills and ultimately improve my english,as mr benny said,If you're good in english,your choices in University are widen.Thank you for listening my speech,good night.(Actually i can add "If you're good in biology,you're jst good in biology.if you're good in matheatics,you're just good in mathematics,you're just good in mathematics,if you're good in English,you are brilliant.)

However,when i stood up in front of 50 peoples,i missed out my poitns,nervousness always kill points,be prepare,first time,feeling fear is bound to happen.It's night and i said good morning,the crowds were laughing(2nd time since the speaking test last year)
But since this is the first time i spoke to so many peoples,i think i have done a good job

When you speak,be humorous,be sensible,but don't ever out of point(it shows your inferiority).

你有信心是好，我也有，但一上台，心里就起作用了。

[ 本帖最后由 darksider 于 6-1-2007 06:53 AM 编辑 ]