伊人

lonely_wolf

佳人经远去，

影似未别离。

醉意尤还在，

神离是为伊。

无邪

学古人的诗
真是今人不如古人也……

lonely_wolf

无邪 于 2-3-2005 16:55  说 :
学古人的诗
真是今人不如古人也……

This is not learn old people, is follow tang shi rule. Not folow the rule mean that is not tang shi gui ge, is xian dai shi.

lonely_wolf

Ofcoz, if old thing is good, then we should learn from old people.

无邪

lonely_wolf 于 4-3-2005 01:36 PM  说 :
Ofcoz, if old thing is good, then we should learn from old people.

说得过去，古人确实有很多我们值得学习的。
可是，谁能无缺点？
应该踩前人的尸体，走出你的路来。
难道你现在还想学那些尸体躺在地上不动？

lonely_wolf

no, u r absolutely wrong! this is the way to write lv shi, this is what we call wen xue. If not, then y u read so many books? All r fr pass what? If acccording to what u say, then y u still using mandarin to talk? u create new language loh, y u still learn fr old people? y u still go to school to learn? u come out new thing loh. without the base, u cannot do any thing.u r very young, think b4 u talk.

lonely_wolf

Doesn't mean that u follow the thing is follow all. This is lv shi format, just like SSPM, STPM, Degree exam format. Dun tell me u not to follow the rule for ur exam. Do u understand what is "RULES"?? If follow what u say, u no need to follow the exam rule during ur course.

无邪

你的诗好，但古人的比你的更好！类似这样的情诗，你写来写去也超越不过古人，换句话说，你的诗是模仿古人的。你看，柳永的多好！（不是就形式而言）有谁不知道你在用tang shi rule!!!?????

lonely_wolf

u r typical type of kia shu people.wen xue hv no clear idea of which is good. I know now I'm still not as good as them. but like u, always think cannot, then u will never cross the bridge. Even xian dai shi also can considered as old lah, since it was fr last century. u r really mao dun. If like what u said, then u also will not 超越 those start xian dai shi. Then y u still write poem? Really moa dun.
1 more is, I'm not 模仿, is follow the rules, do u really know what is 模仿 n follow rules?? Check dictionary lah.

lonely_wolf

Sorry for using English to reply, due to now I'm in office, cannot use Chinese SW.